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Advanced writing · Unit A: Build a paragraph · 10 sentences

A Place I Love

Write a 10-sentence paragraph about a place you love. You will plan your ideas first, then write one sentence at a time. After each sentence you will see a good example and why it works.

A wooden dock and a red rowboat on a calm lake at sunrise, with pink and orange clouds and pine trees along the shore.
Use this photo for ideas, or write about any place you love.

Your paragraph so far

    How each exercise works

    1. Think about the job of the next sentence.
    2. Write it in your own words.
    3. Compare it with a good example and see why it works.