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A Quiet Bedroom

Write a short paragraph about this photo, one sentence at a time. Before each sentence you will think about its job. After each sentence you will see a good example and why it works.

A tidy bedroom with a bed with a light blue blanket and a teddy bear, a wooden desk with a lamp and books, a round rug, and a window with white curtains.
Look at the photo for a moment before you write.

Your paragraph so far

    How each exercise works

    1. Think about the job of the next sentence.
    2. Write it in your own words.
    3. Compare it with a good example and see why it works.